Minor whitespace/wording fixes for the README file

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========= =========
Copyright 1999-2001 Raphaël Hertzog <hertzog@debian.org> and others, Copyright 1999-2001 Raphaël Hertzog <hertzog@debian.org> and others,
2004-2006 Steve McIntyre <steve@einval.com> 2004-2010 Steve McIntyre <steve@einval.com>
This set of tools is licensed under the General Public License version This set of tools is licensed under the General Public License version
2 or any later version. You can find it in 2 or any later version. You can find it in
/usr/share/common-licenses/GPL on a Debian GNU system. /usr/share/common-licenses/GPL on a Debian GNU system.
@ -16,7 +16,6 @@ What is needed?
=============== ===============
Software: Software:
- the apt-get (>= 0.3.11.1) tool - the apt-get (>= 0.3.11.1) tool
- apt-utils (for apt-ftparchive)
- perl (>= 5.004) - perl (>= 5.004)
- bash (or another POSIX shell) - bash (or another POSIX shell)
- make - make
@ -28,6 +27,7 @@ Software:
to convert docs to DOS format (although you can rip that out, too) to convert docs to DOS format (although you can rip that out, too)
- if you want to generate jigdo files: jigdo-file (see below) - if you want to generate jigdo files: jigdo-file (see below)
Other: Other:
- apt-utils (for apt-ftparchive)
- lots of free space on your disks - lots of free space on your disks
- a Debian mirror, on a partition where you can write. - a Debian mirror, on a partition where you can write.
If you can't write on it then you may try to use a symlink farm, If you can't write on it then you may try to use a symlink farm,
@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ $ make status
$ make official_images $ make official_images
However, you really should consider reading further for more information. However, you really should consider reading further for more information.
You can also take a look at build.sh and build_all.sh for an automatized You can also take a look at build.sh and build_all.sh for an automated
way of building CD images. way of building CD images.
The script easy-build.sh offers the easiest way to build a specific image The script easy-build.sh offers the easiest way to build a specific image
@ -78,9 +78,9 @@ The process of building a CD is composed of the following steps:
have to build them one after the other (you may use a shell have to build them one after the other (you may use a shell
script for this). script for this).
Note that the temporary dir must be on the same device than the Note that the temporary dir must be on the same device as the
mirror because debian-cd uses hardlinks for generating an image mirror because debian-cd uses hardlinks for generating an image
tree. If you can't do this, you'll have to use the symlink farm. tree. If you can't do this, you'll have to use a symlink farm.
The symlink farm is explained at the end of this README. The symlink farm is explained at the end of this README.
Keep in mind that the environment variables will stay in the Keep in mind that the environment variables will stay in the
@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ The process of building a CD is composed of the following steps:
other program using the same variables (e.g. kernel-package). other program using the same variables (e.g. kernel-package).
So if you want to be 100% safe, run debian-cd in a So if you want to be 100% safe, run debian-cd in a
separate shell that you can leave after you're done. separate shell that you can leave after you're done.
- then we clean everything that may still be there from previous runs: - then we clean everything that may still be there from previous runs:
$ make distclean $ make distclean
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$ export NONFREE=1; make packagelists TASK=your-task-here COMPLETE=1 $ export NONFREE=1; make packagelists TASK=your-task-here COMPLETE=1
or for something like an official image for the USA (without non-US & or for something like an official image for the USA (without non-free):
non-free) :
$ make packagelists COMPLETE=1 $ make packagelists COMPLETE=1
.... take a look at the file tasks/* to see the options you can have :) .... take a look at the file tasks/* to see the options you can have :)
You can change the behaviour of this command with the following You can change the behaviour of this command with the following
variables: variables:
- if NONFREE is set, then packages from non-free will be allowed - if NONFREE is set, then packages from non-free will be allowed
(NONFREE must be exported to all sub-shells) (NONFREE must be exported to all sub-shells)
- if EXTRANONFREE is set, then non-free packages will be included - if EXTRANONFREE is set, then non-free packages will be included
on an extra CD (the last CD in fact). Don't use NONFREE and on an extra CD (the last CD in fact). Don't use NONFREE and
EXTRANONFREE at the same time ! EXTRANONFREE at the same time!
(EXTRANONFREE must be exported to all sub-shells) (EXTRANONFREE must be exported to all sub-shells)
- if COMPLETE is set, all packages that are not listed in the - if COMPLETE is set, all packages that are not listed in the
selected task file will be included at the end selected task file will be included at the end

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@ -17,6 +17,7 @@ debian-cd (3.1.4) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
Closes: #571591 Closes: #571591
* Minor tweaks to Debian packaging to make lintian happy. * Minor tweaks to Debian packaging to make lintian happy.
Closes: #592932 Closes: #592932
* Minor whitespace/wording fixes for the README file. Closes: #592933
[ Steve McIntyre ] [ Steve McIntyre ]
* Rename log.add_packages to add_packages.log * Rename log.add_packages to add_packages.log