* Other small wording changes and fixes in the README file

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Steve McIntyre 2007-03-18 22:49:30 +00:00
parent cf6994ed78
commit 3484e93314
2 changed files with 23 additions and 12 deletions

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@ -296,6 +296,11 @@ This disc is labeled
which means that this disc is number DISKNUM of a set of TOTALNUM discs.
#if TYPEbinary
It contains programs ("binaries") for `ARCH' computers.
#if ARCHia64 && !ARCHamd64
<P><strong>Note:</strong> this image only supports systems based on
Intel Itanium processors; for the more common Intel EM64T processors,
please see the Debian amd64 architecture.
#endif
<P>
The programs on the Binary discs are ordered by popularity. The Binary-1 disc
contains the most popular programs and the installation tools; it is possible
@ -314,7 +319,7 @@ several languages. Additional translations and updated versions for
the Release Notes may be available from the <A
href="http://www.debian.org/releases/etch/releasenotes">Debian web
site</A>.
else
#else
See the first disc in this set for the "etch" Release Notes.
#endif
#endif
@ -371,12 +376,14 @@ Installing
<tt>&nbsp;
<A href=%%""tools/%%"">/tools/</a>
</tt>
#if ARCHi386
and
<tt>&nbsp;
<A href=%%""install/floppy/%%"">/install/floppy/</a>
</tt>
#endif
#if ARCHi386 || ARCHamd64 || ARCHalpha || ARCHpowerpc || ARCHsparc
#if ARCHi386 || ARCHamd64 || ARCHia64 || ARCHalpha || ARCHpowerpc || ARCHsparc
<P>
For the impatient ones:
#endif
@ -388,12 +395,7 @@ Installing
#endif
#if ARCHi386 || ARCHamd64 || ARCHpowerpc
#if ARCHi386
You can also
#else
you can
#endif
examine the
You can examine the
<P>
<tt>&nbsp;
<a href="install/">/install</a>
@ -425,23 +427,31 @@ Last-Minute Notes
</a>
<p>
<UL>
<LI>
#if OFFICIAL_VAL == 0
<LI>
You should keep in mind that this is an unofficial disc of the Debian
system. This means that all sorts of bugs may be present anywhere in
the system. Please report any bugs you find to the person that gave
you this disc, not Debian.
#endif
#if OFFICIAL_VAL == 1
You should keep in mind that this is a beta disc of the current
<LI>You should keep in mind that this is a beta disc of the current
development version of the Debian system. This means that all sorts of
bugs may be present anywhere in the system.
bugs may be present anywhere in the system. Please report any bugs you
find in the Debian Bug Tracking System; details at <A
HREF="http://bugs.debian.org/">bugs.debian.org</A>.
<LI>If you're reporting bugs against this disc or the installation
system, please also mention the version of this disc; this can be
found in the file <a href="/.disk/info">/.disk/info</a>.
#endif
#if OFFICIAL_VAL == 2
This is an official release of the Debian system. Please report any
<LI>This is an official release of the Debian system. Please report any
bugs you find in the Debian Bug Tracking System; details at <A
HREF="http://bugs.debian.org/">bugs.debian.org</A>.
<LI>If you're reporting bugs against this disc or the installation
system, please also mention the version of this disc; this can be
found in the file <a href="/.disk/info">/.disk/info</a>.
#endif
<br>&nbsp;

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debian/changelog vendored
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@ -2,6 +2,7 @@ debian-cd (3.0.2) UNRELEASED; urgency=high
[ Steve McIntyre ]
* Remove mention of m68k in data/etc/README.html.in
* Other small wording changes and fixes in the README file
-- Steve McIntyre <93sam@debian.org> Sun, 18 Mar 2007 22:09:44 +0000