Minor whitespace/wording fixes for the README file

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Steve McIntyre 2010-08-16 12:56:11 +00:00
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=========
Copyright 1999-2001 Raphaël Hertzog <hertzog@debian.org> and others,
2004-2006 Steve McIntyre <steve@einval.com>
2004-2010 Steve McIntyre <steve@einval.com>
This set of tools is licensed under the General Public License version
2 or any later version. You can find it in
/usr/share/common-licenses/GPL on a Debian GNU system.
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===============
Software:
- the apt-get (>= 0.3.11.1) tool
- apt-utils (for apt-ftparchive)
- perl (>= 5.004)
- bash (or another POSIX shell)
- make
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to convert docs to DOS format (although you can rip that out, too)
- if you want to generate jigdo files: jigdo-file (see below)
Other:
- apt-utils (for apt-ftparchive)
- lots of free space on your disks
- a Debian mirror, on a partition where you can write.
If you can't write on it then you may try to use a symlink farm,
@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ $ make status
$ make official_images
However, you really should consider reading further for more information.
You can also take a look at build.sh and build_all.sh for an automatized
You can also take a look at build.sh and build_all.sh for an automated
way of building CD images.
The script easy-build.sh offers the easiest way to build a specific image
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have to build them one after the other (you may use a shell
script for this).
Note that the temporary dir must be on the same device than the
Note that the temporary dir must be on the same device as the
mirror because debian-cd uses hardlinks for generating an image
tree. If you can't do this, you'll have to use the symlink farm.
tree. If you can't do this, you'll have to use a symlink farm.
The symlink farm is explained at the end of this README.
Keep in mind that the environment variables will stay in the
@ -125,8 +125,7 @@ The process of building a CD is composed of the following steps:
$ export NONFREE=1; make packagelists TASK=your-task-here COMPLETE=1
or for something like an official image for the USA (without non-US &
non-free) :
or for something like an official image for the USA (without non-free):
$ make packagelists COMPLETE=1

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@ -17,6 +17,7 @@ debian-cd (3.1.4) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
Closes: #571591
* Minor tweaks to Debian packaging to make lintian happy.
Closes: #592932
* Minor whitespace/wording fixes for the README file. Closes: #592933
[ Steve McIntyre ]
* Rename log.add_packages to add_packages.log