From 399492b83f776d29cf2d5fc1b14c3fa0398f7a4e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: ruhend
Date: Sun, 11 Jul 2021 05:57:37 +0530
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] fixed grammar and typos issues
---
README.md | 17 +++++++++--------
1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 891efd26..2e52b833 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
-Yet another minimal linux distribution, based on Arch Linux.
+Yet another minimal Linux distribution, based on Arch Linux.
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Yet another minimal linux distribution, based on
@@ -55,13 +55,13 @@ Yet another minimal linux distribution, based on
-**2. Build ISO -** If you're already using archlinux & want to build the iso, maybe with your config then...
+**2. Build ISO -** If you're already using archlinux & want to build the iso, maybe with your config, follow the instructions given below.
***Checklist***
- [ ] **archiso** version: `55-1`
@@ -80,9 +80,9 @@ sudo su
./mkarchcraftiso -v .
```
-+ If everything goes well, you'll have the ISO in **iso/out** directory.
++ If everything goes well, you'll have the ISO in the **iso/out** directory.
-> If you want to Rebuild the ISO, remove ***work*** & ***out*** dirs inside `iso` directory first. then run `./mkarchcraftiso -v .` as **root**. You don't need to run `setup.sh` again, it's a one-time process only.
+> If you want to Rebuild the ISO, remove ***work*** & ***out*** dirs inside the `iso` directory first. then run `./mkarchcraftiso -v .` as **root**. You don't need to run the `setup.sh` again, it's a one-time process only.
### Boot The ISO
@@ -102,20 +102,20 @@ menuentry "Archcraft Live ISO" --class archcraft {
```
-**2. Using dd -** Alternatively, you can use ***dd*** command to make a bootable USB_Drive/SDcard, Just open the terminal and...
+**2. Using dd -** Alternatively, you can use the ***dd*** command to make a bootable USB_Drive/SDcard, open the terminal and do the following
```bash
sudo su
dd bs=4M if=/path/to/archcraft.iso of=/dev/sdX status=progress oflag=sync
```
-**3. Using Etcher -** In case you are afraid of ***dd***, then you can use [Etcher](https://www.balena.io/etcher/) to make a bootable USB/SDcard.
-This supports Windows, Linux, Mac and has a beautiful UI.
+**3. Using Etcher -** In case you want a GUI-based app to do it for you, we recommend [Etcher](https://www.balena.io/etcher/) to make the bootable USB/SDcard.
+Etcher supports Windows, Linux, Mac and has a beautiful UI.
### FYI
-+ Default `username` and `password` is **liveuser**.
-+ After installing Archcraft, run `sudo pacman -Syy` to sync pacman database.
-+ If polybar is not showing some icons properly, run `~/.config/polybar/fix_modules.sh` to fix **Battery** & **Network** Modules.
++ The default `username` and `password` is **liveuser**.
++ After installing Archcraft, run `sudo pacman -Syy` to sync with the pacman database.
++ If the polybar is not showing some icons properly, run `~/.config/polybar/fix_modules.sh` to fix **Battery** & **Network** Modules.
+ You need to enable **os-prober** for Archcraft to detect other installed OS. Edit `/etc/default/grub` file and uncomment `#GRUB_DISABLE_OS_PROBER=false`, then run `sudo grub-mkconfig -o /boot/grub/grub.cfg` to regenerate grub config file.
+ Update the lock screen according to your screen resolution with `betterlockscreen -u /usr/share/backgrounds/wal_10.jpg` if it's messed up.
From 74f44bb83361eb8f1372b068fcc79539f7518f6c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: ruhend
Date: Sun, 11 Jul 2021 06:31:50 +0530
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Fixed grammar and typos
---
iso/profiledef.sh | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/iso/profiledef.sh b/iso/profiledef.sh
index 1ea8fc9c..c74f6f19 100755
--- a/iso/profiledef.sh
+++ b/iso/profiledef.sh
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
iso_name="archcraft"
iso_label="archcraft_$(date +%Y%m)"
iso_publisher="Aditya Shakya "
-iso_application="Yet another minimal linux distribution, based on Arch Linux."
+iso_application="Yet another minimal Linux distribution, based on Arch Linux."
iso_version="$(date +%Y.%m.%d)"
install_dir="arch"
buildmodes=('iso')